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The Story of Celestia and Luna

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Long time ago, before the rule of Celestia, There were two alicorns , like now, But the two who ruled Equestia, were Queen Galaxia and King Universum. They ruled a beautiful monarchy and every one was happy.

  Of course is was not just ponies in Equestria.  Griffons, Zebras, and Dragons lived there. Though Griffons and Ponies had a rough war a few years but the Ponies and Griffons found reason. Zebras were very well relative with the ponies, as they helped with the Ponies in battle. Zebras are very strong fighters, and great medics with their remedies and medicines. Dragons liked to be left alone and didn't really care much for the ponies. Though every race got alone fine.. There are the ones that only want hate, and destruction to fill our world..

One unfaithful day, the two powerful spirits, Eris and Khaos , both gave birth to the most unearthly creature.

   Their offspring had  all sorts of things. Head of a mule, trail of a dragon, body of a griffon, wing of a dragon, wing of a Pegasus, horn of a antelope , horn of a ram, tooth of a tiger , beard of a goat, leg of a reptile, leg of a deer, lion paw, and a raven claw.
     
He was a hideous being, but his parents were proud. They gave him the name.. Discord. Eris and Khaos both wanted to spread death and horror to the species of Equestria. They hated their ways of peace through the colonies, but most importantly, they hated Galaxia and Universum.
      
      A long time before, The king and queen both battled Eris and Khaos. The four fought for power of the thrown and its creatures in it.
     
  Khaos and Eris sent their minions, the windigos, to feed of the hatred of the pony tribes. Galaxia and Universum saw this, and fought Eris and Khaos. Eris and Khaos almost defeated Galaxia and Universum , but they had a trick up their sleeves.
     
   The king and queen lived in spirit before, as well as Eris and Khaos. They always battled a little quarrel and both Galaxia and Universum saw they were going to go to war with them soon. Thus, they both gave the spirit of Friendship in three fillies, hoping to help them in their battle. Thus, when Clover the Clever released her "unknown" unicorn magic,  The King and Queen both defeated Eris and Khaos, turning them into a creature a lot like Discord.
      
    Then, in that same moment, Galaxia and Universum turned into beautiful alicorns. When the three tribes of ponies found the Galxia and Universum, they made them their King and Queen. Of course they knew they had to be special and knew they were spirits before.
    
      Eris and Khaos both gained there strength just enough to give an offspring to do their bidding. Both Eris and Khaos were weak and very old, so they needed a son or daughter to defeat the King and Queen.
       

    After years of teaching and training, Discord was ready. Unlike his parents, he was very humerus and a clown. Though, his parents frowned upon this, he didn't care. Discords parents wanted death, and destruction towards everything and everything to be ruined. Discord just wanted to give strange and bizarre ways he thought were proper.
     Soon his parents wearied away knowing destruction and revenge will be soon. Discord went to Equestria.
         

   Everyone noticed peculiar things, like floating chairs, raining chocolate, when they tried to drink their drink, they drank the glass, or that their food tasted different when they ate it. Then, it hit big. The houses would float or go upside down, the grass would be as tall as their heads, or down to the dirt, Griffons and pegasi would subconsciously fly in all directions uncontrollably, dragons treasure would melt in their hands and their scales would grow in unthinkable sizes, Unicorns magic was ineffective, Zebras remedies would be defective and poisonous for no reason, and their pre-made potions would explode, and earth ponies crops would grow in unbelievably sizes.
        
   Galaxia and Universum would try their magic, it was also ineffective. Discord came to them laughing saying that they should see how angry they were.
     
   They were not amused.
   
When they tried their magic against Discord, it backfired on them. He laughed. He told them that their powers were nothing against him, he had whatever was left of his parents power and he sucked the power from the depressed, scared, and confused ponies.
     
Since the kingdom was out of order, The king and queen lost most of their power.
    
The king and queen held a meeting beyond the suburbs of the Kingdom. They invited he rulers of the Zebras, Heiress Honovi and Chief Gahege , Griffins, Queen Alala and King Alexamdros, and the Dragons, Lady Daria and Lord, Anicetus.

    They debated on what to do and how to stop him. The Dragons and Griffins both agreed we should battle.
     
   But the Griffins wanted to fight dirty, and deadly, while the Dragons wanted to just get it over with. The Griffin leaders don't see how they can get a point across for future rebels if they don't show a warning. Dragons just wanted to set this guy on fire and be over with it so they can continue their royal napping.

   The Zebras debated they didn't want to lose any more warriors then they have from their last battle. They wanted to see if they can try and adjust or discuss with things between the terrible creature causing this havoc.
    
   Galaxia and Universum saw both sides, but when they tried to settle down the debate, it only got worse. Galaxia screamed in a heavy bellow to stop this nonsense and settle down.
   
   It all quieted and Galaxia said we need to fight, but not rough and bloody, not a massacre but a rebellion against this evil force. She said that this "creature" wouldn't seem to take reason as he only wants power.

    Lady Daria spoke up saying she and her people tried fighting with this creature when he tried to take some of the dragons as his followers. She said the dragons fought with all the anger they had for this nonsense but it didn't do anything. He seemed invincible.

     Universum's eyes sparked. He spoke of his sudden thought and vision. He said this creature is the offspring of Eris and Khaos , his goal is to feed off the hate, depression, and other negative feelings from living creatures.
   
   Honovi said we should try to fight, but not with anger, but with heart. Everyone agreed.

  Galaxia said they should make a "one power" if this ever happens in the future.

Gahege said make some sort of magical elements.

  Everyone liked this idea. Elements of Harmony, as Galaxia liked to put it. The tribe leaders thought of magical powers that made up harmony.

Anicetus and Daria spoke of Generoisty, to share the passion of gifts to another.

Honovi and Gahege mentioned Kindness to make another comfortable and welcomed.

Universuim added Honesty for another to be trusted.

Galaxia spoke of Loyalty to show you will always be there for another.

Anicetus also mentioned Laughter to bring a smile and happiness to another. Then, the door to the hall was opened and then out ringed a voice echoed Magic.

   It was Starswirled the bearded. When asked why he was here, he replied he knew of Discords doing and that the element of Magic holds the sole of the elements together, and the elements holds magic. Starswirl, Galaxia, and Universum both used their magic to bring the soles of these elements to be held both in spirit inside 6 gems the Dragons so gracefully gave.

   Starswirl warned Galaxia and Universum they will not make it if they defeat Discord, he told of them that they used half of their magic for the elements, but they need to use their soul magic to defeat Discord, and They must bring new leaders into play before they leave this world. They agreed and were very calm about this shocking news which surprised the other leaders.

   Before Galaxia and Universum left, Starswirl told them that they will not defeat Discord, but only weaken him, weaken him enough that he will not have the power to even walk, their new leaders they would choose would have to defeat him in a future time.

  They nodded and head off to find Discord. He didn't seem threatened till a blast of magical energy from the elements knocked him, knocked him hard, that he was blasted off on the other side of the world. From there , he planned his parents revenge..
   
   Galaxia and Universum were very weak they couldn't get up. They took the word of Starswirl, but instead of choosing, they gave the new leaders.

  Galaxia had two offspring. One beautiful white alicorn with a short straight pink mane, and a dark violet blue alicorn with a short straight night blue mane. She and universum smiled weakly at their new daughters.

    They named the white alicorn Celestia, and the dark violet one Luna. They gave them the magic to control night and day, before their good-byes, Galaxia and Universum kissed their daughters and with tears in their eyes, gave the rest of their magic to them.
       Galaxia and Universum did not die, their bodies have died. Galaxia and Universum remain in spirit watching over their daughters and helping them in the future..

  Starswirl found the two crying fillies and picked them up. He looked at the sky and said that he would take care of these two beautiful fillies.
Celestia seemed older when she was born, since she was taller and more developed , unlike Luna.

    Starswirl taught them both about magic and helped them learn how to control the sun and moon. Celestia's pink mane started flowing and changed its color over time. Instead of one color, it would have two. Over the years it added strips of color till she had four beautiful strips of color on her physic defying mane.

    This had happened since she had learned all her powers and was now a true princess. Luna, on the other hand has not. Soon Starswirl had died off and joined Galaxia and Universum.
     
    One unfaithful day, Discord had returned. He caused more unhappiness and chaos to Equestria. He used to play the ponies like puppets for a show.

Celestia and Luna didn't know what to do, for Starswirl never talked about Discord. He could not teach Celestia and Luna everything for their journey in life, they had to control this on their own.
  
   He did, however, teach about the Elements of Harmony. To control the Elements, you need to show their true potential. The princesses had no idea what that meant though.
    Discord had Celestia and Luna in his hand. He played them like puppets. He threw them on the ground and laughed.

   Celestia and Luna held each other and they both told each other they loved each other and the other was the best sister the other could have. Then, A light glowed that interrupted Discords gagging session. Six elements have appeared and subconsciously , the two sisters controlled them and turned Discord into stone while he was mocking this like he was going to be defeated, which he was.  
    
    He was put in the statue garden to show the triumph of the two sisters, whose love and friendship can defeat chaos and disruption. And that is our story of our beloved princesses.
Update 12/2/12
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The picture can be found here; [link]
This story is really old and this is my pretty much first real finished fan fic, so sorry if it's pretty bad, and very horrible, I was going to remake this but I just never got myself to do it.. xD
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I decided to make a little fanfic of the origins of celestia and luna
The names of the other leaders have meanings
Zebra Leaders (Native American);
Honovi - Strong Deer
Gahege - Cheif
Griffin Leaders ( Greek);
Alala - War-Like
Alexandros - Warrior
Dragon Leaders ( Latin);
Daria - Golden( Possessions well)
Anicetus - Unconquerable
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Hope you really enjoy this <3 This is my first typed fan-fic and i know some things may not line up but oh well :P
My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic belongs to Lauren Faust and the picture belongs to its rightful owner.
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Really liked it, although some of the grammer is a little off